“Life rewards action.”
July 10, 2008
I’ve got a pissed off shadow
and I ain’t afraid of that man today
because his feet are splintered biscuits
his height is only length,
and it wilts with the sun
but when it’s dark, he’s everywhere
he’s sneaking in through my open mouth
and I’m choking on something that only wishes to defy me.
July 12, 2008 at 11:53 pm
Reuniting would be
dishonor.
July 13, 2008 at 3:50 am
meep meep
July 20, 2008 at 4:03 pm
Mollie,
There is something strong and weak and wise
and wrong and right and wise about you…all
good things by the way.
What is captivating about your writing is your
soulful almost mournful use of words…which
are like collages sniped from the past, present
and future…
I wonder what you will do next…
Be Well
Poetman
July 31, 2008 at 2:29 pm
i like this….. “I’ve got a pissed off shadow
and I ain’t afraid of that man today
because his feet are splintered biscuits
his height is only length,
and it wilts with the sun
but when it’s dark, he’s everywhere
he’s sneaking in through my open mouth”
this is good