i fall to piece s

November 11, 2008

fall and fall and fall
winter at the brook
an impotent sun’s streak
through dirty window
i clean and the roaches
re organize
assembly at the watering hole
somehow i see you
less and less clearly
in proportion to
how the image of me grows wonky
out the shadow of some candy-box memories
you are beautiful
always beautiful
and reminding me
of what
i can’t say
a season is turning
and I’m at its cusp
shivering while sweating
curling to a sweater
and parting it open


One Response to “i fall to piece s”

  1. blonderblondest Says:

    very good work

    i love that break “you are beautiful”
    a shift in tone

    very nice i think

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